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WHAT COULD BE BETTER?
What could be better..?
That’s what we ask
when we revise.
What could be better..?
Improve the story
you’ve devised.
Go on and write it down!
My story’s got 3 little pigs.
A big bad wolf trying to
blow down houses made
out of straw and sticks,
which were no problem
until he found that last house
was made out of bricks.
That hungry wolf now had a
task. He was a huffin’ and a
puffin,’ down, which isn’t bad,
but have you asked…
What could be better?
What if the pigs were
chimpanzees?
What could be better..?
They’d make their houses
in the trees!
Maybe I’ll change the big
bad wolf to something.
After all… how could he
climb high? Maybe a robot
on a trampoline, who’s not
so bad… maybe polite!
Perhaps the wolf is a giraffe,
with a long a neck and
purple spots. The only way
to make his spots turn brown
is eating chimpanzees
for lunch.
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The first chimp’s house could
be made out of origami.
The second chimp’s of
rainbow looms.
What could be better than a
huffin’ and a puffin’?
Maybe the giraffe could…
sing tunes!
Its singing voice would be
so terrible that the walls
could come falling down!
The third chimp’s house
could be a magical Lego
castle that’s… underground!
What could be better?
The chimpanzees now
safe and sound!
What could be better?
I can’t forget to
write it down!
Go on and write it down!
The second write is
consistently better than
the first.
Your choice is a question:
make it better or leave
it worse?
Does your dialogue contain
everything that you wish..?
Do you start off with a bang?
A hook your reader can’t miss?
Is it better, or the best?
Are you proud of your work?
Settle for nothing less than
being 100 percent sure!
Revising is the best step
if you’re up to the task.
When you think you’re finished